Really talented ! the last scene is remarkable ! the background music and sounds ? did you just apply those in , as i know how much new grounds are for everything being your own.
Im only asking as ive recently uploaded mine then took it down after reading the agreement about copyright , where i have used some sounds, where ive just simply added into the background , but the main feature is my voice , heres mine https://soundcloud.com/user544417940/animation-video-games-demo-reel-2016
i just added those in but i see your demo has the same mistakes mine does. you put voice in with music and noises. don't get me wrong that was some fantastic work but they could sound immensely better if you have sounds, BG music, and a perfect idea for a line/ scenario that work really well togther. the only poor example i can give is the final scene in this demo.
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